托福考试写作真题范文分析-生物类话题  ​　这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中，独立写作都是重复之前的考题。其中，综合写作考查动物类，整体难度适中，生僻词汇较少。

　　独立写作考查生活类话题，难度适中，重复2013/7/20号考题，学生在备考过程中有关此类话题基本都会涉及这一题。

　　综合写作

　　话题分类生物类

　　考题回忆总论点

　　大猩猩使用过工具的三个证据。

　　阅读部分分论点一： 发现石器是黑猩猩用过的，和当今情况的一样

　　分论点二：石器是它们用来砸果子、坚果的，和现在黑猩猩吃的一样

　　分论点三：工具出现时间早于人类，所以只可能是chimps 用的

　　听力部分分论点一：根据石器的大小判断，猿人也可以使用

　　分论点二：

　　石器可能是用来削树根的，猿人吃树根, 也有可能吃坚果, 尽管现在不吃

　　分论点三：

　　古人到处迁徙, 也许没有长期在Ivory Coast居住，但可能去过那里

　　解题思路阅读和听力之间构成相反的关系，且听力按照每个分论点两个层次来处理较好，听力尽可能写的详细些。

　　参考范文范文:

　　Both the reading and the listening discuss about whether

　　chimpanzees used the tools. The reading affords three pieces of evidence, while the listening, through three contrary points, contends that chimps did not necessarily use the tools.

　　First, as the reading suggests, the stone tools which were used by chimpanzees are identical to those in

　　society today. However, the listening points out that the ape man might have used the similar tools according to their sizes. In this case, the tools used by chimps might be wrongly attributed to apes who could employ tools. As a result, chimps perhaps did not use the tools.

　　Second, the reading mentions that the stone tools were used to smash fruit and nuts just as the chimpanzees now eat. The listening, on the other hand, argues that the stone tools were possibly used to cut the roots. Besides, the

　　ape men perhaps ate the plant roots or nuts, which they do not eat now. It means that we cannot certainly decide that chimpanzees used the tools.

　　Third, the author further illustrates that the tools predated appearance of humans, so did chimps with the only possibility for tool use. However, the lecturer holds that ancient people traveled a lot. Maybe they didn't live in Ivory Coast for long, but they probably visited it. Thus, the signs for tool use might indicate that the tools were used by ancient people.