托福考试独立写作范文分享-教育成长类  　这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中，独立写作都是重复之前的考题。其中，综合写作考查动物类，整体难度适中，生僻词汇较少。

　　独立写作考查生活类话题，难度适中，重复2013/7/20号考题，学生在备考过程中有关此类话题基本都会涉及这一题。

　　独立写作

　　话题分类教育成长类，（重复2013/7/20）

　　考题回忆Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Parents now spend too much time on determining the future things of their children; children should be allowed to make their own choices."

　　解题思路

　　写作思路：

　　观点：选择应该让孩子自己做未来的决定，但是父母应该给与一定帮助

　　正方论点:孩子自己做决定可以使他们掌握更多技巧，敢于面对挑战，职业发展的好。

　　让步段：父母也应该给与一定的指导和帮助，也就是在孩子做决定的时候，父母的角色是辅助孩子。

　　参考范文范文：

　　Nowadays parents are increasingly concerned about their children’s development, spending too much time on determining the uncertain future of their children. This phenomenon is prevalent in society. However, more wisely, parents, in my opinion, should allow children to make their own choices for the future, but some necessary parental assistance should be given.

　　Making a decision by children themselves helps children to acquire skills better, which make them face challenges bravely for better career advancement. In this society full of competition, children should be equipped with enough experience and ability to survive and thrive in the future. If the children can decide what they desire to do, their development is likely to reach the highest level within their possibility. For example, my friend Jim, on the basis of his strengths, had the freedom to opt for a desired university for a dream major. He did spare no efforts to spend time and energy on the major, mastering relevant expertise and doing research into his field. After graduation, amid the fierce competition on the job market, he came out top by virtue of the solid foundation laid in his university years. Working with an international company, he has been recently promoted to a marketing manager with a decent salary and perks, in that he can handle numerous complicated issues through what he has learned.

　　However, it is advisable for parents to offer some timely help if necessary. The children, especially those who have come of age, are psychologically immature or impetuous when they have to make a choice for their future. The parents, as it were, should give children some liberty but cannot go as far as to sit idle without doing anything. In some cases, children’s making a choice is not as easy as it seems, which might lead to some fearsome consequences beyond their calculation or prediction. It is on such an occasion that parents should be considerate and have a liberal attitude, affording some guidance and pointing out the potential problems. Through the discussion between parents and children, the children’s options can be practical and wise---for instance, a middle school student can avoid detours by not choosing something which is obviously unsuitable for his quality and talent. In this sense, the role the parents are playing is highly appropriate.

　　In conclusion, it is better to give children autonomy to decide future development by themselves, so that what they do is to theirtaste and helps to unlock their potential. In spite of this, parents also should assist children to have a clear orientation, guiding them through the turmoil of life.