2021年4月21日托福写作真题机经回忆和解析【独立写作】,本文由培顿 教育上海学校吴越老师提供,综合点评,这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中,综合写作是新的考题,独立写作有出现过类似的题目。其中,综合写作考查威胁熊猫生存的三个问题。
独立写作考察学生在上大学的时候,父母在给孩子建议的时候,是建议孩子选择感兴趣的专业还是会有高薪水但是不是最感兴趣的工作呢。
独立写作
话题分类教育类
考题回忆Many students starting university must choose a major (main field of study at university), and parents of these students often give them advice about which major to choose. Some parents tell students to choose the major that most interests the students. Other parents tell students that it is best to choose a major that will lead to a job with a high salary, even if that major may not be the one that most interests the students.
Which approach do you believe is better and why?
解题思路
写作思路:
要点:教育类的话题,需要父母给孩子一些建议,可以从几个角度出发,孩子本身,家长本身,以及专业本身。
观点:agree
1.从孩子的角度
(1)孩子选择自己感兴趣的专业,在学习的时候就会充满热情和动力,自然会取得好成绩。
(2)行行出状元,只要孩子在感兴趣的专业做到最好,以后一定也能找到一份薪水还不错的工作
2.从家长的角度
(1)鼓励孩子鼓励孩子去选择喜欢的专业,有利于孩子的身心健康成长,以及家庭关系和睦。
(2)家长最在乎的是孩子的快乐成长和快乐学习,兴趣是最好的老师。
3.让步:选择以后可以导向高薪的工作固然很重要,因为高薪水可以给孩子带来高质量的生活,孩子同样可以在高薪和高消费里感受快乐。但是选择自己感兴趣的领域,能带来持续的精神享受和物质享受。
参考范文范文:
College is often regarded as an important turning point in life, People assume what they study in college will determine their future earnings. A dilemma lies between choosing a major that will translate to a job with descent pay and choosing a major one is truly interested in. between the two choices, one should lean towards the major he finds attracted towards because he will invest himself into learning and excel in such an area to earn an adequate amount anyways.
Choosing a major that is assumed to earn well is unnecessary because people who are the best in the majors they are interested in can also be wealthy. One of the most popular majors currently is economics. Many students choose economics not because of their passion for it, but because they assume understanding how the economy works will make them a good player in the system. However, many students later lose interest in economics and no longer strive in such an are, making their choice of a high salary major useless. On the other hand, if the student chose a major he enjoys but is not considered a high salary job such as pottery, and became the best potter around town, he will be well-paid. Regardless of the area, people can depend on it to earn a living if they can do well.
Students will work harder adn earn better grades in their interested areas compared to those who are forced to study majors with good returns, People cannot devote themselves to work in areas they do not care about it. If an art student is pressured to study astrophysics, a discipline considered to be the hope of future generations, he will fail to understand the creation of stars because his minds is wondering in the starry night of Van Gogh. The same art student will stand out in art major because he feels motivated to learn more about the art world. Coercively pushing a student away from their interest will result in poor results because they cannot focus fully on the high-salary major.
Students should choose to study topics they gravitate towards because they are more likely to feel motivated to learn about this area, and thus become the best in their area to earn well.
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