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精读雅思官方范文· 剑14 test 2 大作文· 必须掌握的逻辑!

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导读:  雅思考试大作文中关于剑14的真题解析,今日为大家推荐剑桥雅思14~Test 2~大作文,必须要撑怕逻辑!希望可以帮助到各位同学。  本范文

  雅思考试大作文中关于剑14的真题解析,今日为大家推荐剑桥雅思14~Test 2~大作文,必须要撑怕逻辑!希望可以帮助到各位同学。

  本范文最值得学习几点:1. 环境类话题,非常好的语料2. Discuss both views题型,观点中包含绝对词时文章的逻辑

  剑桥雅思14~Test 2~大作文

  Topic: Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  从以下方面精读:

  1. 文章结构

  2. 语料

  3. 文章逻辑

  雅思官方考官范文

  TEST 2,WRITING TASK 2

  MODELANSWER

  This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.

  Some people consider that the loss of individual species of plants and animals is the main environmental problem of our time. Attempts to preserve rare or dying species are carried out in zoos or other specialist plant and animal facilities, through breeding programmes,preservation orders and other forms of protection and there was genuine sadness among many when the last surviving white rhino died earlier this year.

  Survival of the fittest is nature's way of ruthlessly allowing weaker specimens to die out, although mankind has also contributed to falling animal numbers through hunting and poaching. However, whether saving individual species should be the main focus of environmental protection is debatable. Climate change and excessive use of plastic are just two other major problems that deserve our attention.

  The evidence of climate change is there for us all to see: rising sea levels and associated flooding with the loss of homes at low land levels are becoming more frequent. Many countries and island communities are now calling for urgent action to delay, halt or even reverse the process,although if we believe the experts, reversal is impossible. Habitable areas are gradually shrinking, often for some of the poorest groups of people, but there seems to be little obvious action taking place. If the major contributors to climate change will not support the reduction of greenhouse gases, there is little hope for the future.

  Naturalists have also bequn to expose the serious problems arising from discarded plastic waste. Birds and animals can die gruesome deaths through being trapped or caught up in plastic bags or ropes, while the long process required for these plastics to decay means that they remain a threat for many years to come. Worse, there is now beginning to be evidence of sea creatures ingesting smaller globules of disintegrating plastic, which harms them and all the other creatures in their particular food chain.

  The loss of particular species, both flora and fauna, is cause for regret, but I do not agree that they are the most important environmental problems these days. If climate change and damage from plastic continue, there will be less land and less food for everyone, including plants and animals.

  文章中词汇方面非常好的collocation

  文章第三段和第四段是非常好的环境类话题语料,有精力的同学可以背诵

  the loss of individual species of plants and animalscarry out attemptsbreeding programs, preservation orders and other forms of protectionsurvival of the fittestallowing weaker specimens to die outhunting and poachingproblems that deserve our attention.rising sea levelsthe loss of homes at low land levelscalling for urgent action to delay, halt or even reverse the processhabitable areas are gradually shrinkingmajor contributors to climate changethe reduction of greenhouse gasesproblems arising from discarded plastic wasteexpose the serious problemsbeing trapped or caught up in plastic bags or ropesremain a threat for many years to comein their particular food chain

 

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