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I shall argue in this essay how irrational the claim of voting the prohibition of selling food and beverage that are proved harmful to people would be.
Before assessing whether those types of food intake should be forbidden or not, one should first make a clear definition of “harmful”. Anything that is eaten by people in their daily life may become “harmful” if without scientific eating amount or frequency. That means all food or beverage, nutritious or unhealthy, would somehow become toxic anyway if people blindly eat them without considering the physical situations. Therefore, I would say that one can never draw a clear line between regular catering materials and the so-called “harmful” food when there are no premises set on the quantity or eating frequency. Then is the impracticality of the supposed policy: how can we solely ban the selling of certain types of food only when they are relatively more “harmful” than others, but permit others that are less than harmful but would also be unhealthy under some circumstances? It is the ambiguity of the criteria towards these actions that compels me to reject this notion.
Apart from the lack of credibility on the judgement of “harmfulness”, the given claim would also be unpersuasive because of its recklessness. This type of prohibition is practical only when its foreseeable contribution definitively outweighs the drawbacks it may provoke. Let alone how hardly the act can be implemented, the possible outcome of this is clearly dark and negative; it would certainly deprive certain catering industries of the ability of survival and would make the entire society face the sadness of unemployment. Companies related to, say, snacks, alcohol or soda, would immediately witness their fate of extinction and end up with corruption, sending a throng of fired employees into the talent market, who would suddenly increase the pressures pushed on the government and human resource departments. Whereas that is still not the whole story when lots of countries then realize that they would experience vicious slumps in their international trade, in which the old days' economic titans—coca-cola, KFC, burger king, Hennessy, etc.—would never make any money for their own countries, who would also not be that abundant to purchase inside the global importing and exporting chain.
In conclusion, the absurdity and the calamities witness behind this notion make me strongly veto it and I certainly believe that feasibility and possible hazards should be meticulously testified before any prohibition of food and drinks, even if they may be seemingly harmful to our health.
相关词汇和语法结构
Irrational 不合理的
Beverage 饮料
Nutritious 有营养的
Premise 前提
Impracticality 不现实性