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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their studies?
题目来源:2021年8月28日大陆雅思大作文(重复15年2月28日大陆考题)
题目大意
一些学生高中毕业后选择出去旅游挥着工作一段时间而不是直接上大学。有什么好处坏处
高分范文示例
Nowadays, an increasing number of students determine to seek a job or take a trip for a period of time after graduation from senior high school. Yet, there remain some arguments as to whether the overall effect of this trend has been positive or negative. I personally believe that this movement has both sides of good and bad and needs to be considered more deeply.
On the bright side, students have to cope with plenty of stress and burden when they are in senior high school. Hence, they need to relax after years of hard study. Considering this, traveling or working are two of the best options. Besides, only through working, high school graduates could learn more working experience and marketable skills, which they by no means acquired from their teacher. Moreover, after traveling around the world, they can also broaden their horizons, appreciate the natural landscape, and even get close to nature to take a fresh breath.
However, some problems have been identified and need to be accessed. After a period of working or traveling, many students might forget what they have learned from their senior high school and find it difficult to start studying again. Moreover, when students can make money from their hands, some may feel that they could stand alone without further education. In fact, university and college will improve their career prospects as well as offer more opportunities for well-paid jobs and a high standard of living. A recent American report has announced that the average salary of university guarantees is higher approximately 25 percent than those who do not have a college degree.
To conclude, taking a breaking time period or go straight to the university is a matter of personal preference. From my perspective, students may lose their experience and chance in their life if they do not attend to the university as they can travel or work after graduation.
相关词汇和语法结构
by no means 绝不可能
career prospects 职业前景
Well-paid 资金优厚的
Approximately 近乎