写作结构的学习主要是分析考官满分范文的写作结构，不仅是段落之间的逻辑结构，还要学习句子之间的逻辑结构，我们会发现即使用词简单，但是逻辑严谨也是高分的作文。
 

　　写作结构方面的学习按照题型大致分3类：discuss，agree or disagree和原因分析类。每个类型的详细结构如下，精确到句子之间的逻辑。

　　大作文——结构+语言

　　三种题型的结构：

　　discuss ——范文剑8T1-P163

　　开头段：倒三角

　　主体段1：

　　a.是什么

　　b. 为什么要这样做

　　c. 怎么做/这样做的好处

　　主体段2:

　　a. 承上启下

　　b. 是什么

　　c. 为什么

　　d. 有怎样的影响

　　结论段：

　　让步+自己观点

　　agree or disagree： ：类似讨论类——范文剑9T1-P163

　　原因分析：——范文剑7T3-P167

　　开头段：倒三角

　　主体段：回答问题1。原因+观点+解释——又详又略

　　结论段：总结或重申

　　下面我以discuss为例，帮烤鸭们明确一下分析考官范文逻辑结构的要点。

　　剑8T1

　　Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

　　Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

　　开头段——倒三角

　　A child's education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

　　三个核心词分别是education，good members of society和parents/school，并按照概念范畴由大到小排列，构成到倒三角的结构。

　　主体段1

　　In order to be a good member of any society the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.

　　通过对概念的解释和因果关系的分析外加具体化的例子，让这个段落论证的内容显得十分立体。

　　主体段2

　　However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.

　　与上一段类似，都是说明了因果关系外加详细的例子来说明学校方面的责任，同样也比较清晰。

　　结论段

　　But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility for every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.

　　这段最大的特征是对文章的内容和观点进行了一个生活，认为教育孩子成为社会好成员不仅是家长的责任也是学校的责任，更是社会中每个公民的责任。

　　综上所述，不知烤鸭们是否可以大致理解如何分析考官写作的逻辑，并根据这个逻辑思维结合同类题型来组织自己的写作。相信用不了多久，我们的逻辑思维能力就会得到锻炼和提升。

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