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　　大作文题目

　　In many countries,planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh its disadvantages?  (20170729)

　　高分范文

　　作者：杨亮

　　While stuck in traffic jam or wasting excessively  much time on their way to somewhere, urban residents all over the world like to complain about their chaotic urban outlay.It sounds rational that a city can be well organised by planning functional areas separately. However, on no account can urban planning be that simple.

　　每当交通堵塞或者为了去某地而在路上耗费大量时间的时候，全世界的城市居民都想抱怨他们所在城市的混乱布局。独立规划城市的各个功能区听起来很合理，但是，城市规划绝不是如此简单。

　　Imagining that we were living in a city with many  particular zones,each of which had a specific   function,such as a business or housing zone. We certainly would meet some troubles there. Primarily, every morning thousands of private vehicles would go to the zone of schools from residential areas, and likewise a great number of cars would go to the zone of malls and supermarkets at weekends. As a result, this directed and heavy traffic flow,without any doubt, could cause traffic jams that people did not want at all. Additionally,dwellers in a city like this need to drive for a long distance to buy their daily necessities since in the living areas there would be no stores planned, and similarly they had to drive out of the zone they were living in to access all kinds of social services like going to hospital, school, and work. In fact, those social services ought to be thought as supporting ones planned near or in housing areas. Accordingly,urban planning like this is doomed to generate great inconvenience for local residents.

　　想象一下，我们住在一个有很多特定区域的城市，每个区域都有其特定的功能，如商业区或住宅区。在这里我们肯定会遇到一些麻烦。首先，每天早晨都会有成千上万的私家车从居民区出发去学校所在的区域。同样，每逢周末也会有大量的汽车去商场和超市所在的区域。结果就是，毫无疑问，这些定向的巨大车流量会导致人们不愿意看到的交通堵塞。此外，这个城市的居民需要开车走很长一段路才能买到他们日常生活的必需品，因为在居民区根本没有商店。同样，他们也必须将车开出居民区才能获得其他的社会服务，如医院、学校和公司。事实上，这些社会服务应该是居民区里面或附近的辅助性服务。因此，这样的城市规划注定会给当地居民带来巨大的不便。

　　Contrarily, advocates to urban layouts like this  argue that planning cities in this way makes our cities more manageable. Notwithstanding,the first principle of city planning is, of course,for bringing residents as much convenience as possible. As to city administrators, they are merely public servants whose interests can never be beyond that of the people.We construct cities for offering a good living environment for every citizen there,but not a comfortable working environment for those city administrators.

　　相反，如此规划的支持者们辩称这样的城市规划会使我们的城市更便于管理。但是，城市规划的首要原则当然是要尽可能地给城市居民带来便利。就城市的管理者而言，他们只是公务员，他们的利益永远不能超越人民的利益。我们建设城市是为了给每一位城市居民一个良好的生活环境，而不是给城市管理者提供一个舒适的工作环境。

　　In a nutshell, living in a city with many zones of different functions must be a nightmare. Meanwhile, city planning is a complicated subject, and obviously it is not as easy as playing the board game Monopoly.

　　简单来说，居住在一个有很多不同功能区域的城市肯定是个噩梦。同时，城市规划是一个非常复杂的话题，显然，它不像玩“大富翁”游戏那么简单。

　　注：本文节选自《雅思写作三人行》

　　杨亮老师自评

　　首先，城市规划类话题隶属于社会类话题范畴，在雅思写作考试中较为常见；其次，本题要求进行优缺点的对比，这是非常常见的提问方式；故本题整体难度有限，因此，我的写法也比较常规。

　　开头段，不仅介绍背景、点明主题，还清晰地表达了我的立场。随后的主一段，提出了两个论点——定向的交通流量和居民区远离社会服务，这两个论点分别从缺点方面回应了主题。如果将这个主一段分解成两个主体段也完全可以。本文中的第二个主体段，先介绍这种政策的一个优点，随后再反驳这个优点，进而证明其错误性。通过这个逻辑来完成优缺点的比较，是此类问题较为常见的论证方法。本文整体论证逻辑清晰简单，并且开头段已经很清楚地表达了立场，因此结尾段可以自然、简要地说明结论。

　　文章篇幅还是略长，主要原因是主一段的论证过于具体。如果需要删减篇幅，有如下两个办法：其一是直接删除主一段的第二个论点；其二是把主一段的两个论点只用一句话说明，再加一句话展开。

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